[MPlayer-DOCS] CVS: main/DOCS/man/en mplayer.1,1.1000,1.1001

[Diego Biurrun]

On Wed, Jun 08, 2005 at 02:21:32AM -0400, The Wanderer wrote:
> Richard Felker CVS wrote:
> 
> >+.B remove-logo=/path/to/logo_bitmap_file_name.pgm
> >+Suppresses a TV station logo using a PGM or PPM file to tell it
> >+which pixels comprise the logo. The width and height must match
> >+those of the video stream being processed. Uses the filter
> >+image and a circular blur algorithm to remove the logo.
> 
> Missing comma - "logo, using".
> 
> There is no antecedent for "it" in the first sentence, and I think it's
> not a clear usage in any case. The simplest fix would be to say
> "determine" instead of "tell it", but although better that still isn't
> really satisfactory.
> 
> Add "of the image file" or similar after "width and height". To that
> end, and for clarity with the usage in the third sentence, it might be a
> good idea to say "image file" in the first sentence - "a PGM or PPM
> image file". This is slightly redundant, but I think better overall.
> 
> Also, the rule is that each sentence must begin on a new line, owing to
> roff pickiness; this breaks that rule twice.

All applied.

Diego