[MPlayer-DOCS] CVS: homepage/src projects.src.en,1.159,1.160

[Diego Biurrun]

On Fri, Jul 15, 2005 at 04:19:45PM -0400, The Wanderer wrote:
> Diego Biurrun CVS wrote:
> 
> >+		"Imaging solutions with Free software and open hardware",
> >+		Elphel makes network cameras that can output MJPEG or Theora
> >+		streams. The hardware design is completely open and the
> >+		software they produce including a customized Knoppix and
> >+		MPlayer are available from their
> >+		<a 
> >href="http://sourceforge.net/projects/elphel/">SourceForge project 
> >page</a>.</li>
> 
> You need to separate out "including a customized Knoppix and MPlayer"
> from the rest of the sentence. The job can be done equally by commas,
> parentheses or emdashes, and it doesn't really matter which in this
> instance, but it does need to be done.

OK, thanks, going in soon.

Diego