[MPlayer-DOCS] CVS: homepage/src projects.src.en,1.159,1.160

[The Wanderer]

Diego Biurrun CVS wrote:

> +		"Imaging solutions with Free software and open hardware",
> +		Elphel makes network cameras that can output MJPEG or Theora
> +		streams. The hardware design is completely open and the
> +		software they produce including a customized Knoppix and
> +		MPlayer are available from their
> +		<a href="http://sourceforge.net/projects/elphel/">SourceForge project page</a>.</li>

You need to separate out "including a customized Knoppix and MPlayer"
from the rest of the sentence. The job can be done equally by commas,
parentheses or emdashes, and it doesn't really matter which in this
instance, but it does need to be done.

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