[FFmpeg-devel] FFmpeg OPW

[Timothy Gu]

On Thu, Jul 3, 2014 at 8:15 PM, Reynaldo H. Verdejo Pinochet
<r.verdejo at sisa.samsung.com> wrote:
> Hi Timothy.
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> On 07/03/2014 08:34 PM, Timothy Gu wrote:
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>> On Thu, Jul 3, 2014 at 3:11 PM, Reynaldo H. Verdejo Pinochet wrote:
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>>> Patch for web/news attached. OK to commit?
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>> Please do a 80-col wrap. Some remarks:
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> Wouldn't generally wrap HTML text inside </p> to avoid littering
> it with trailing white space but looking at rest of the entries
> it seems to be preferred indeed. Done.
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>>> +support at least one internship (6K USD) so if you were holding on
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>> USD). So if you are holding on to
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> Meant to use "were" and don't like the "to" in "TO your donation TO
> FFmpeg", guess the meaning its clear and still gramaticaly correct?
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>>> +your donation to FFmpeg, this is a great chance for you to come
>>> +forward, get in touch and help both the project and a great initiative
>>> +all at once!
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>> This sentence is kinda long. Consider dropping "get in touch" and/or
>> "all at once" and/or breaking up the sentence.
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> Dropped the "all at once" but I'm not 100% happy with the sentence.
> That was the bit I wanted to stress. Anyway, done.
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> The 'long' enumerative I kept. That was an style/tone decision.

Patch LGTM.

Timothy