[FFmpeg-devel] FFmpeg OPW

[Reynaldo H. Verdejo Pinochet]

Hi Timothy.

On 07/03/2014 08:34 PM, Timothy Gu wrote:
> On Thu, Jul 3, 2014 at 3:11 PM, Reynaldo H. Verdejo Pinochet wrote:
>> Patch for web/news attached. OK to commit?
>
> Please do a 80-col wrap. Some remarks:

Wouldn't generally wrap HTML text inside </p> to avoid littering
it with trailing white space but looking at rest of the entries
it seems to be preferred indeed. Done.

>
>> +support at least one internship (6K USD) so if you were holding on
>
> USD). So if you are holding on to

Meant to use "were" and don't like the "to" in "TO your donation TO
FFmpeg", guess the meaning its clear and still gramaticaly correct?

>
>> +your donation to FFmpeg, this is a great chance for you to come
>> +forward, get in touch and help both the project and a great initiative
>> +all at once!
>
> This sentence is kinda long. Consider dropping "get in touch" and/or
> "all at once" and/or breaking up the sentence.
>

Dropped the "all at once" but I'm not 100% happy with the sentence.
That was the bit I wanted to stress. Anyway, done.

The 'long' enumerative I kept. That was an style/tone decision.

Thanks for taking a look.

Bests,

-- 
Reynaldo
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