[MPlayer-DOCS] [PATCH] How can I dump a full DVD title into a file?

[The Wanderer]

Guillaume POIRIER wrote:

> Here it is! :-)
> 
> Please comment, review, nitpick... I just love it!

Only about 1.5 comments, neither particularly fatal... with or without
them, the patch looks okay to me.

> +  Once you succeed in making <application>MPlayer</application> play
> +  your favorite Internet radio, you can use the option
> +  <option>-dumpaudio</option> to save the stream into a file.

Are you sure this shouldn't be "radio station" (or perhaps "radio
stream")? If the latter, I'd say "save that stream" instead of "save the
stream" later.

> +  This also works with all protocols supported by
> +  <application>MPlayer</application>, like MMS, RSTP, etc.

I might say here "and so forth" instead of "etc.", because, properly
speaking "etc." is an abbreviation and as such requires a second,
separate period; you'd wind up saying "like MMS, RTSP, etc..", which
looks odd even though it's technically correct.

Most people aren't going to notice the issue, however, and it's probably
fine to leave it alone.

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