[MPlayer-DOCS] CVS: homepage/src news.src.en,1.230,1.231

[Diego Biurrun CVS]

CVS change done by Diego Biurrun CVS

Update of /cvsroot/mplayer/homepage/src
In directory mail:/var2/tmp/cvs-serv1099/src

Modified Files:
	news.src.en 
Log Message:
wording, grammar fixes, some simplifications and clarifications


Index: news.src.en
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/mplayer/homepage/src/news.src.en,v
retrieving revision 1.230
retrieving revision 1.231
diff -u -r1.230 -r1.231
--- news.src.en	17 Aug 2005 11:43:18 -0000	1.230
+++ news.src.en	17 Aug 2005 13:45:21 -0000	1.231
@@ -8,29 +8,30 @@
 <div class="newsentry">
 
 <h2>
-	<a name="thanks">2005.08.17, Wednesday :: thanks</a>
+	<a name="server_thanks">2005.08.17, Wednesday :: thanks</a>
 	<br><span class="poster">posted by Alex</span>
 </h2>
 
 <p>
 Firstly, we would like to thank all donators for the generous contributions
-we have received in the last weeks. We had never dreamed the appeal would be
-so successful, which consequently changed our plans significally. Now we have
-ordered a much better server than expected, which opens the path for us to
-offer more services. We can even afford a backup solution! The server is
-expected to arrive in four weeks.
+we have received in the last weeks. We had never dreamed the call for
+donations would be so successful. Now we have ordered a much better
+server than expected, which opens the path for us to offer more and
+better services. We can even afford a backup solution! The server is
+expected to arrive in four weeks, but we will need a few more weeks
+for stress-testing and completing the setup.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 The list of donators can be found on the <a href="donations.html">donations</a> page.
-Please <a href="mailto:alex at mplayerhq.hu"> mail me</a> if you would like to
+Please <a href="mailto:alex_REMOVE_THE_UNDERSCORES_AND_THE_TEXT_IN_BETWEEN_ at mplayerhq.hu">mail me</a> if you would like to
 have your name removed. Also due to some bank transfer conditions, some names
 are missing or wrongly spelled. Mail if you need correction!
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Next updates will contain deeper information about the hardware and services.
-To be continued...
+Next updates will contain more in-depth information about the hardware and
+services. To be continued...
 </p>
 
 </div>
@@ -45,17 +46,18 @@
 </h2>
 
 <p>
-Merged the vesa efforts of MPlayer and MPlayerXP. And together with some
-utils from svgalib and vbetool this forms vesatools. Starting the next
-MPlayer release, this library will be used for the Vesa video output.
-This adds support for Free, Net and OpenBSD.
+I merged the VESA efforts of MPlayer and MPlayerXP. Together with some
+utilities from svgalib and vbetool this forms vesatools. Starting with
+the next MPlayer release, this library will be used for the VESA video
+output. This adds support for FreeBSD, NetBSD and OpenBSD.
 </p>
 
 <ul>
-    <li>Web page: <a href="http://mplayerhq.hu/homepage/vesautils/">http://mplayerhq.hu/homepage/vesautils/</a></li>
-    <li>CVSweb: <a href="http://www1.mplayerhq.hu/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/?cvsroot=vesautils">http://www1.mplayerhq.hu/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/?cvsroot=vesautils</a></li>
-    <li>Mailing list: <a href="http://mplayerhq.hu/mailman/listinfo/vesautils-devel">http://mplayerhq.hu/mailman/listinfo/vesautils-devel</a></li>
+	<li>webpage: <a href="http://mplayerhq.hu/homepage/vesautils/">http://mplayerhq.hu/homepage/vesautils/</a></li>
+	<li>CVSweb: <a href="http://www1.mplayerhq.hu/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/?cvsroot=vesautils">http://www1.mplayerhq.hu/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/?cvsroot=vesautils</a></li>
+	<li>mailing list: <a href="http://mplayerhq.hu/mailman/listinfo/vesautils-devel">http://mplayerhq.hu/mailman/listinfo/vesautils-devel</a></li>
 </ul>
+
 </div>
 
 
@@ -122,48 +124,19 @@
 
 <dl>
 <dt>Paypal</dt>
-<dd>Use poirierg at gmail.com
-	as destination.</dd>
+<dd>(removed)</dd>
 <dt>European bank account</dt>
-<dd>
-<pre>
-Account name: Beregszaszi Alex (removed)
-</pre>
-</dd>
+<dd>Account name: Beregszaszi Alex (removed)</dd>
 <dt>US cheques</dt>
-<dd>
-<pre>
-Richard Felker
-Kerchof Hall
-P.O. box 400137
-Charlottesville
-VA 22904-4137
-</pre>
-</dd>
+<dd>Richard Felker (removed)</dd>
 <dt>German bank account</dt>
-<dd>
-<pre>
-Account name: Reimar D&ouml;ffinger (removed)
-</pre>
-</dd>
+<dd>Account name: Reimar Döffinger (removed)</dd>
 <dt>Swiss bank account</dt>
-<dd>
-<pre>
-Account name: Attila Dogan (removed)
-</pre>
-</dd>
+<dd>Account name: Attila Dogan (removed)</dd>
 <dt>French bank account</dt>
-<dd>
-<pre>
-Account name: MR POIRIER GUILLAUME (removed)
-</pre>
-</dd>
+<dd>Account name: MR POIRIER GUILLAUME (removed)</dd>
 <dt>Hungarian bank account</dt>
-<dd>
-<pre>
-Account name: Beregszaszi Alex (removed)
-</pre>
-</dd>
+<dd>Account name: Beregszaszi Alex (removed)</dd>
 </dl>
 
 <p>