[MPlayer-cvslog] CVS: main/DOCS/tech release-howto.txt,1.5,1.6

[The Wanderer]

Roberto Togni CVS wrote:

> Modified Files:
> 	release-howto.txt 
> Log Message:
> Fixes suggested by The Wanderer

Not all of them:

> -- build the HTML docs from XML sources; then cleanup
> +- build the HTML docs from XML sources, then cleanup.
>      make html-chunked; make releaseclean

I suggested both a colon at the end of the 'header' line, where you now
have a period and before had nothing, and separating "clean up" into two
words. If you prefer, the phrasing "then do cleanup" would also be
valid, but simply "then cleanup" is not. The salient point is that
"cleanup" is a noun (to which the verb "build" would be being applied
unless you first provided a new one, such as "do"), whereas "clean up"
is a verb phrase.

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       The Wanderer

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