[Ffmpeg-cvslog] CVS: ffmpeg/doc optimization.txt,1.9,1.10

[Måns Rullgård]

Diego Biurrun <diego at biurrun.de> writes:

> On Sat, Jun 11, 2005 at 08:05:19PM +0200, M?ns Rullg?rd wrote:
>> diego at mplayerhq.hu (Diego Biurrun CVS) writes:
>> 
>> > +As many functions, like the C ones tend to be a bit unreadable currently
>> > +because of optimizations it is difficult to understand them (and write
>> > +architecture specific versions, or optimize the C functions further) it is
>> > +recommended to look at older CVS versions of the interesting files (just use
>> > +ViewCVS at http://www1.mplayerhq.hu/cgi-bin/cvsweb.cgi/ffmpeg/?cvsroot=FFMpeg)
>> > +or perhaps look into the other architecture-specific versions in i386/, ppc/,
>> 
>> That sentence isn't very pretty.  Split it in two, and add some
>> punctuation, or something.
>
> Yes, it's overly long.  I've split it and applied your other
> suggestions as well.

I'd go a little further, strike out some parts entirely, and say
something more like

  As many functions tend to be a bit difficult to understand because
  of optimizations, it can be difficult to optimize them further, or
  write architecture-specific versions.  It is recommened to look at
  older...

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M?ns Rullg?rd
mru at inprovide.com